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Hey guys! I started a website for vinyl/music. Tell me what you think!


jht95
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Your site looks nice, but you need to learn how to write.

 

 

If you actually want criticism, the grammar is poor in some places. . . word choice and comma usage.

This. What I bothered to read was vague and hollow. Words made into weak sentences, sentences clumped together into paragraphs that don't go anywhere. Altogether uninteresting.

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If the site is gonna be all about you and your writing about music, you better make that shit interesting to read. As it stands, it sounds like a 10th-grader's essay about something they like. "Every track makes you feel relaxed and that is what I love most about the sound Blue Sky Black Death has produced." " The vocals on the albums Third Party and Slow Burning Lights take you on this trip that can't be explained in words. Late Night Cinema is an album I highly recommend listening to while it is raining. Trust me you will thank me later it will change your life." I'm no professional writer, but nobody cares if something sounds 'amazing' or if it'll 'change my life.' That's what middle school kids say about KoRn and what teenage girls say about One Direction. Talk about technical aspects, how it compares to previous albums by that artist, things you did and didn't like, how it affects the current musical trends, what genres or artists the music derives from, what people on the scene are saying about them, talk about the band themselves, side-projects, how the pressing itself actually sounds, fucking anything. And either get a thesaurus or just stop using the word "feel" altogether.

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