jayeffscene Posted October 29, 2010 Share Posted October 29, 2010 I did stand-up last night on my 22nd birthday and am pretty happy with how it went. Let me know you're thoughts, like always. JM, shoot me an email if you have any notes. Thanks, folks. <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayeffscene Posted October 30, 2010 Author Share Posted October 30, 2010 Grade me...look at me...evaluate and rank me! Oh, I'm good, good, good, and oh so funny! Grade me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest markovianprocess Posted October 30, 2010 Share Posted October 30, 2010 I watched, but honestly, I think your best joke of the lot was a throw-away comment about the whisky mixed with whisky that obviously only a guy could invent. I thought you were good, but you need to work on your punchlines, and on using your voice more effectively to emphasise on certain parts of the joke. It was delivered in a too straight-forward manner, there weren't really any punchlines which surprised me (other than the blowjob on my birthday bit). I don't do stand up myself, I just watch a lot of comedy DVDs/tv shows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittenmittons Posted October 30, 2010 Share Posted October 30, 2010 i already told you what i thought but my bff watched your video randomly on fb (since i commented on it it showed in his feed) and he actually made a point to bring it up and tell me he thought you were really funny. *clap clap* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.