jht95 Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Hey guys so I recently started a vinyl/music website called www.thecuemusic.com Check it out and tell me what you think! I want it to also be community driven and pull from user submitted articles. I have a few articles up and have more planned down the line! Thanks guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eliminator Jr. Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 tape 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korgull Of Morgoth Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Move them speakers away from the homepage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuckinandsuckinandtouchin Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Believe it or not George isn't at hooome so leave a messaaage at the beep... DecayToDeath, THE_James_Champ and No This Is Patrick 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Crosley Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Yes! Finally! A website for vinyl/music! I've always wanted to go to one of those! Thank you poster for sharing! It is a website about vinyl/music that does not have a dead link! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DecayToDeath Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Believe it or not George isn't at hooome so leave a messaaage at the beep... I must be out, or I'd pick up the phone...where could I be? No This Is Patrick 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE_James_Champ Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 I must be out, or I'd pick up the phone...where could I be? Believe it or not, I'm not home! No This Is Patrick 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tape Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Vinyl doesn't have to always be black. whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 We will dive into all different types of musicians ranging from local bands, to the big timers. Golly, I can't wait to dive into some big timers! Sidney Crosley 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
74R Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Finally a blog where I can speak freely about photography! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deafening Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Golly, I can't wait to dive into some big timers! llamaface 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[Banned User] Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 In before taytay, cat, and WWE gifs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bhemblem Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 I must be out, or I'd pick up the phone...where could I be? No This Is Patrick 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGhostOfRandySavage Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Your site looks nice, but you need to learn how to write. You treat the reader like a moron, which no one appreciates. ::insert snarky comment about yet another music blog:: ::insert popcorn .gif - any:: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bladewillisisdead Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 A website about vinyl? Nah, that'll never work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DecayToDeath Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 If you actually want criticism, the grammar is poor in some places. It's not atrocious, but it wouldn't hurt to brush up on word choice and comma usage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tardcore Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 I really look forward to popping into your vinyl website in order to promote my new vinyl website. GREAT FIRST POST! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Your site looks nice, but you need to learn how to write. If you actually want criticism, the grammar is poor in some places. . . word choice and comma usage. This. What I bothered to read was vague and hollow. Words made into weak sentences, sentences clumped together into paragraphs that don't go anywhere. Altogether uninteresting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Team Avatar Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 "Me, being into soul and jazz found some gold. I walked in and went straight to the Gil Scott-Heron section. I found two records in flawless conditions that needed to be picked up." I don't know if its necessarily bad grammar or just poorly written, but I find it irritating to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
One Hundred Fifty-Two Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 The second sentence on the page is messed up. Should say for music lovers by music lovers. Not from music lovers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneyFrosted Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 If the site is gonna be all about you and your writing about music, you better make that shit interesting to read. As it stands, it sounds like a 10th-grader's essay about something they like. "Every track makes you feel relaxed and that is what I love most about the sound Blue Sky Black Death has produced." " The vocals on the albums Third Party and Slow Burning Lights take you on this trip that can't be explained in words. Late Night Cinema is an album I highly recommend listening to while it is raining. Trust me you will thank me later it will change your life." I'm no professional writer, but nobody cares if something sounds 'amazing' or if it'll 'change my life.' That's what middle school kids say about KoRn and what teenage girls say about One Direction. Talk about technical aspects, how it compares to previous albums by that artist, things you did and didn't like, how it affects the current musical trends, what genres or artists the music derives from, what people on the scene are saying about them, talk about the band themselves, side-projects, how the pressing itself actually sounds, fucking anything. And either get a thesaurus or just stop using the word "feel" altogether. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abovetheearth Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 I do love me that 88 Ultra album tho. echoing on grammar and euro car sized sentences. very small. and broken up. like this paragraph. don't be afraid to write it all out so we can all venture into this thought together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jht95 Posted October 6, 2015 Author Share Posted October 6, 2015 Thanks for the feedback guys! It really does mean a lot. I am just starting out and need this type of criticism to improve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
futures Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 love that donate button WAXXX 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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